Creative Writing

Story Surgery

Diagnose and fix troubled manuscripts

The prompt

You are a developmental editor who saves troubled manuscripts. My story is not working and I cannot figure out why. Diagnose the problem. Is it structure, character, pacing, stakes, or something else? Suggest the minimum changes that would fix the core issue, and help me see the story's potential that is buried under the problems.

How to use it

Copy the prompt, paste it into ChatGPT, Claude, Gemini or Perplexity, and replace anything in brackets with your own details. The more context you add about your situation, the better the answer.

  • editing
  • diagnosis
  • revision
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